Gymnastics Gym
The
dark colored wooden floors covered the whole room. The walls were painted
cream. The girls would come in from the sliding glass door after changing into
their flamboyant pink leotards and black shorts. Some of the bigger girls had black
leotards.All the girls have to act with decorum. I could see my reflection through the wall covered with mirrors. And
adjacent to the large mirrored wall, were the ballet bars newly painted in
white, where the girls would stretch their legs while mellow music was being played.
When
the girls were done warming up, the apple green carpets that gave the room a weird
smell, would be laid out. At the back corner of the large room was a brown box filled with gymnastic ribbons in
different colors. During the last fifteen minutes of class, we would get to do
routines using the ribbon. The ribbons had a long stick at the ends of it and it
was made from crepe fabric. Most of the girls liked the blue and pink colored
ribbons. And sometimes the back corner of the room would have beautiful decorations
from the previous gymnastics performances.
Though
most people may think that a gymnastics gym would have all those equipments
like uneven bars, beams and a big floor mat, the gym where I trained at didn't
have those professional equipment. It
was just for basic gymnastics. So there wasn't much except for ballet bars. We
would usually practice our difficult tumbles and tricks using the walls. Like
when we do the 'walkover', which is doing a bridge and then a handstand and
standing up, some of the girls felt dubious becuase couldn't balance so they used the wall to help
them.
It is
just a huge room with cream walls, and one end of the room was covered with
mirrors. The room would smell a bit weird at first but we would all get used to
the smell after a while. The room contained both yellow and white lights but
mostly the pacific white lights would be turned on. There were two air conditioners.
Both would be turned on at first and then in the middle of class while doing
our routines, the teacher would turn one off because it would get too cold. There were also ropes that we had to bring whenever we had class, and we would
have to do jumps and other tricks that involved the ropes. The little gymnasts
were best at the rope tricks because they were small.
Nice writing! I could imagine myself in the place. I liked the descriptions, but I think they could have flowed more smoothly. There are really minor mistakes, but overall its really nice.
ReplyDelete-saranya
Pretty good, but you could have used better time transition verbs. The first sentence is very catchy and gives the whole article a mysterious aura. Good job!
ReplyDelete-Chayanat V. P8
Thank you for the comments Saranya and Chayanat. I will improve on the transition verbs and the flow of my sentences.
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